VFNM: craigslist re-edit

The feedback on my craigslist story in class was helpful for realizing which images read correctly and which were “misunderstood.”  I made a new edit with two new photos, the last two portraits of Toast 1 and Toast 2, to make it look more like they are on their computers, sitting alone in there “apartments.”  I also redid the music, because the original track I felt was too sparse and didn’t match the emotional tone of the piece.  The new track, which ends abruptly, sounds more like what the crazy text looks like.  The unreadability of the text is purposeful.  I like the way it looks and the images (supposedly) tell the story.


Author: owen ribbit


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